In class we have been making writing and I made it about a dog this is my writing:
The biggest and fattest dog - Daniel
This dog went to the beach his name’s fat bum…. Yes a really weird name, but it is what it is. Anyway he is a very happy dog and his owner took him to the beach and he played round everywhere… but he went too far in the water and he almost drowned but atleast he took swimming lessons and he swam back to shore. Later that day he found a gannet and he quickly dug his sharp teeth into it’s neck, then you heard a loud crack and saw it’s head turn ragdoll, the owner said “good boy” and the dog said “bark bark.” And they lived happily ever after… apart from the gannet.
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