The other day we made persuasive writing, so we had to choose a description and chose we should be allowed to take phones to primary.... Sadly blogger won't let me put a picture of the writing in so I will have to copy and paste. I did 3 paragraphs and my conclusion as you can see below.
P1.
I think that kids in primary through to high school should carry phones with them because, how will they contact their parents or siblings to pick you up. What if they are lost and don’t know where to go from a friends house.
P2.
What if your bored on the bus or something, you need some music or a game to play.
P3.
If the school burns down And you have your phone on you then call your parents to pick you up. If you don’t have your phone on you then you won’t be able to go home.
Conclusion
All i’m saying is just to let your students bring your phone to school, thank you for listening to my speech.
Score...
Me: 22
Sam: 22